No probs man.... you a good critique?..would you read some of my work...please.... most is poetry, but some are rap lyrics I've written, I'd appreciate it...
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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget
"Zealous in my mind And blind to see That this world is revolving Chronologically"
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I've seen things you people wouldn't believe....
Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion.
I watched c-beams glitter in the dark near Tanhauser Gate.
All those moments will be lost in time like tears in rain. Time to die.
Devious Comments
If you are, I'm Nine Ten Doh from those nefarious forums.
If you aren't, ignore this. ^_^
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kthx
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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget
"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically"
110705
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~Temporis Magister~
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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget
"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically"
110705
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Don't talk. Don't talk. It makes it crawl back up.
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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget
"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically"
110705
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One life; Win or lose it's all on a bet
One chance; Don't show fear and do not forget
"Zealous in my mind
And blind to see
That this world is revolving
Chronologically"
110705
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Mythril>3 njsykora
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You're entitled to your opinion. Just don't think that I care about it.
~Kou//UnMod-OCR
meh. my work sucks. don't look at it.
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I've seen things you people wouldn't believe....
Attack ships on fire off the shoulder of Orion.
I watched c-beams glitter in the dark near Tanhauser Gate.
All those moments will be lost in time like tears in rain. Time to die.
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